Lord Of The Flies By: William Golding
Chapter Number 4 :
Painted Faces And Long Hair
Character: Ralph
On Chapter four Ralph See's how Jack finally gets a pig and kills him. I think Ralph was feeling like it was kinda weird and awkward to kill a pig and eat it after it but them he thinks about it and he realizes that he needs to help Jack hunt for pigs if he wants to survive. In my point of view I think Ralph is thinking the right away but I also think he should try to be nicer to piggy and cared about all the other kids not just him and he should of stand up for piggy and not act cruel to him because I think Ralph knows that Piggy is really sensitive.
2 comments:
I think you did a good job describing how jack just wanted to kill the pig. And I also think you did a good job describing ralphs feelings. You just need to add in those words.
Beyra - I think you did a really good job discribing what Jack's mind is based on doing with the pig. I can tell you get what type of person Jack is. As well as Ralph. Keep up what you having going on in your wirting style. :)
Post a Comment